Thread:SupcommMonroee/@comment-4068313-20120508012411/@comment-1743498-20120508015848

Not bad of a start, though the names are very similar to some of Tolkien's work. One way to make it a tad more original is to look at Tolkien's inspirations - Norse mythology and rural England.

The Dhragolon for example are inspired by a variety of real world cultures, but I adjusted them to fit in a different environment.