Board Thread:New on Galactic Crucibles/@comment-5135903-20141008164704/@comment-5135903-20141010214719

Avetzan1 wrote: I think the chapter 1 so far sounds like an overview-prologue, rather than a chapter. Just to mention. I've turned the first passage into a Prologue, because I've just realised I'll have to switch from present to past tense to continue the story, which would be really weird mid-chapter.