Thread:Nra 'Vadumee/@comment-5459707-20120830052603/@comment-5459707-20120830152750

So, after careful reading of both of your comments I have reworked my original ideas into a different format with changes for clarity and accuracy.

The Basic History- Some humans come to a planet far off from earth and colonize it. Their technology only lasts the scant months they need to make certain parts of the world more easy to use for agriculture, resource harvesting, and for building towns. So after they have a decent starting block they begin having children who in around twenty years turn the Population of a few hundred thousand into the millions. Because of the limited terraforming that they start out with the people divided up into separate kingdoms and make war on each other trying to gain control of the terraformed resources that are so much better than the ones they find naturally. This along with the constant struggle to fight off the forces of the wild world itself keeps the population closer to one million rather than several. So though they are ruled by kings, their “Kingdoms” are composed of say only a thousand or so men. It took the original settlers about 16 years or so to terraform enough of the planet for their convenience, so for the next 100 to 120 years they existed as the only species capable of true intelligence. Somewhere between that 100-120 year period the population was conquered by a King who became the first emperor. He kept it together by 1) taking the most powerful kings and making them part of his Council of Kings and 2) establishing a religion and priesthood that kept the people bound together by a single god.

The Good Stuff- So now that I’ve brought their story almost up to the present day, I only have around 40-20 years left to play around with, (though I am leaning closer to twenty because of the time space travel takes) I can get to the main meat of the story, or should I say meet. After they had been established as an empire for say ten years or so, a relatively young empire, a ship landed on their planet. My original idea was to have the ship be a left over sliver of the once great Harbinger Empire, but that’s not really my species so I leave their Identity to a later date. So anyway this alien ship lands and the battered but more advance people who come out begin to lay siege to the whole of the Empire. Expecting little resistance from the weak people of the green planet the invaders are surprised when the human beings resist even in the face of their imminent demise. They surprise the invaders so much so that they are able to steal some victories along with some alien technology which they put to good use. In the final battle the humans attack the strong hold of the aliens killing them majority of the invaders either in the battle or in a sort of military trial after the fact. So after years of war with the strange alien creatures they have become victorious and have earned a ship and slaves to drive it. So figuring that the Universe owes them a Military colony sets off from the green wild planet to get some retribution.

All in all I was hoping for two really cool things from this project 1) a couple stories about a war between an advanced race and my weaker humans with the impossible victory at the end and 2) a future plot that involves Omni 1 at large and all variations of the human race. I scanned the current story arcs and liked them, but I was thinking that when the whole titan technology issues end it might be interesting if the humans from Josfur arrived setting up some kind of New Human Empire on a planet they take over. In the end I have some vague idea of a lot of humans betraying their new governments to join the Empire to reform the human race in one main location; this would put all humans into doubt and could possibly be a good internal story arc. By that I mean the danger is from the humans within the various governments rather than from a force from without.

I hope this clarifies some of my earlier statements and fixes some of my earlier fumbles at creativity that were contrary to your universes cannon. Thanks, from here down is all old information.

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Civilization-

Genus = Homo

 Species = Homonovum (i.e. New Human)

 Characteristics = Weak of body and breath, on many other planets than their own, though they are strong of will and mind. They are slim of girth and short of stature. They are a war like people whose first though is to their comparatively crude metal weapons. They are known for their ability to adapt to any combat conditions, and as they move out into the universe at large, any technology.

 Culture = They are a post barbaric people who have only recently been drawn into becoming a planetary empire and are still very factionalized. The Priests of the Unforgiving and their religion are a main ingredient to the creation and continuation of the empire. All Johs-Fu have the same religion and worship the same Forest God “whose name has been Forgotten”. They are an Honorable people and they believe in Karma as the Forrest God’s justice. They believe in perfect justice so much so that they can be known to take it upon themselves to become agents of Karma and go slice up their enemies. Above all else they hate those who do not have what they perceive as “Honor”.

 Government = The Empire is ruled by a council of Kings who chose and Emperor, who can be anyone, to govern the external matters, while they themselves are in control over all internal issues. So the Emperor controls the Armies Navies and Foreign Affairs, but the Kings control the families of the Military and the Empire they live in. The Priests are an unassociated group, but only with their agreement are decisions made concerning the Empire at large.

 Geology = At the moment the Johs-Fu only live and rule on Josfur.

Lone Wolf