Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-5870856-20130824232138/@comment-1743498-20130826013005

Actually, this is really good - more than enough detail. Just keep in mind that in the actual article, you won't be able to compare it to anything outside the universe (referring to the Star Trek reference). Once you start writing and expanding upon it more, the rest of us can give you feedback in refining the smaller details. For now though, I will give the greenlight for this pitch. Once another admin approves it, you may begin creating articles.