Thread:SupcommMonroee/@comment-3582436-20130314003142/@comment-3582436-20130318000024

Alright. I'll replace some of the names I used with the terms we will use in the GC version:

In the reaches of space, light years from our planet, a gargantuan object disengaged from FTL. It rocketed across the heavens, faster than any Human spacecraft could go.

This was not just any ship. This was the T.S.S. Uraniko of the Royal Starfleet of the Democratic Federation of Species in the Norma Arm. It was one of the largest vessel in the galaxy. At sixteen kilometres long, the Uraniko had over six hangar bays, and had a silver hull made of an alloy of steel, titanium and iron, strengthened by imported Dragonrock, an isotope of iron [?], known to be the strongest metal in the galaxy.

Naturally, the High Command of the Starfleet would've chosen the top captain to command the top ship. This person was Captain Kunamo Hara. One of the most adept of Starfleet officers, Hara was a tall, strong Tsuinaron with black hair and brown, sparkling eyes. His four-fingered hands could turn any piece of junk into a fully operational machine. His kangaroo-like ears were some of the best ears a Tsuinaron could have.

And so it was that Captain Hara, along with his crew, sped across the vacuum of black nothingness on board the Uraniko, en route to the planet of Technosilis, where the enemies of the DFSNA, the Silence Union, were attacking a stationed fleet belonging to the Eteno, an ally of the Tsuinaron.

"We are in the vicinity of Technosilis, sir," reported Hara's navigations officer. "Shall we open fire?" Before Hara could answer, Silence Union weapons had unwisely fired at the Uraniko. Nevertheless, the ship's shield had been weakened.

"Fire! Fire!" shouted Hara. The Uraniko's laser batteries and torpedo cannons proceeded to smother a ship with flames. The other vessels retorted with more gunfire, crippling the Uraniko's tachyon generator...