User blog comment:IceBite/HS Wiki, reaching out/@comment-771241-20120416002233/@comment-1743498-20120416003555

You should easily be able to pick up on it just by reading it out loud. Here's an example:

''Alban then noticed her leg was bent at an odd angle. It must have broken during the crash. "Oh no," Alban said, taking a closer look at the injury. "It must have broken in the impact."''

You say "it must have broken" twice. You could easily revise it just like this so it flows better:

''Alban then noticed her leg was bent at an odd angle. "Oh no," Alban said, taking a closer look at the injury. "It must have broken in the impact."''