User blog:Krayfish/Possible Twin of Loneliness 2 Rework

Okay, so we all know Ahrganot as the one who doesn't have powers. I mentioned in the "Your Inspiration?" blog that I wanted to come close to being an anti-hero.

However some parts, especially during the beginning of Twin of Loneliness 2, I unintentionally made him too much like a pushover and and a bit angsty. Not really the approach I was going for. I'll admit, I didn't really like how it turned out after coming back to it much later. But now with some more characters introduced, he's developed more.

Personality
Generally, Ahrganot has the fatal flaw of being envious. He is jealous of the other GSSOC's powers and is very contempt. Of course, since the Dhragolon are supposed to hide their emotions, he usually can remain calm and collected and speak casually.

Now, during Money Cushion, that's when he unleashed it. So here is the big change: After Money Cushion, rather than brooding about himself, instead he loses control and Ahrganot pulls a knife on Sol I Dor threatening to kill him. The GSSOC then exile him for that. (I might have to add more sections to Twin of Loneliness 2 after all.) And of course, we all know he has to come back so the GSSOC regret and go back for him.

But before I make these major changes, what do you guys think?