User blog comment:Krayfish/A New Audience/@comment-1743498-20120401172909

By the way, some of you may be hesitant for this, but I think we should actually start critquing each others work. (i.e. Write reviews.) It's definetely a good way to make our stuff better. Here's a simple example. I spoke with the one who drew the picture of Krayhan recently and asked for feedback.

"What do you think of the wiki so far?"

"It's pretty cool."

"Anything in particular that needs improvemnt?"

"Not really. I find it hard to follow sometimes because of all the fancy names and such."

"Oh, so it's just following the backstories then?"

"Yeah, that's about it."

So there you have it. We should work on making the stories easier to understand for those unfamiliar with the background and mythology.