Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-5870856-20130824232138/@comment-1743498-20130825004002

This looks like a pretty good place to start. However, most pitches are significantly longer than what you have here. If you are looking to add more, here are some things to consider:


 * More information about the appearance of the Zi'vani as well as their homeworld. (i.e. Their physiology and adaptions.  )
 * A brief overview of their culture - specifically, how they came to be the way they are today.
 * Info about their philisophical/religious beliefs
 * Optional: An ongoing conflict that would provide the foundation for a storyline.