Talk:The Razing of Ashadra/@comment-771241-20120428060638/@comment-1743498-20120428144134

The only thing I can think of is that I would like to see a bit more detail in the very beginning describing Galiana's daily life. What is a normal day on Ashadra? Even though it is almost exactly like Earth, there's bound to be something intrguing about it.

So an extra paragraph at the beginning answering that question will do, but other than that, it's good so far.