Thread:Nra 'Vadumee/@comment-5459707-20120830052603/@comment-796766-20120830220144

Oh, another thing before I renew my critique; Geology is the study of rocks and minerals.

As for this newer and truly better pitch, I'm still shaking my head down the text.

Humanity is a complete no factor in the galaxy. They were evacuated in 1987 or so. A little under 20 years after the moon landing. They are not going to have people on the other end of the galaxy setting foot on another planet. Not only that, it's unoriginal. Be creative with your species. Note how no two species here resemble humanity entirely. The Karnasaurs even shaped humanity via early history contact.

The low tech level prevents writing in the style we're accustomed to.

How are crude metal weapons in the hands of hundreds of thousands going to beat out an interstellar race likely using plasma or laser technology? I'll leave it to Suppy, but it makes no sense to me.

The whole story idea reeks of cliche and mainstream sci-fi. The underdog barbarians beating the aliens, stealing their stuff, and going out to do space stuff.

Like most new users, you're aiming too big too soon. I say that constructively. Because you are a new user, and I can tell you're new to original narrative. Only major authors are allowed to write events which affect Omni 01 at large, and that's because the wiki was built for us.

Not only this, but I can also tell you're unaware of the overall plans on the wiki. Dark Prophecy is the first story arc. Titanic Discoveries is a single story. Upon completing Dark Prophecy and cleaning it up, we have two more story arcs, both more ambitious and larger in scale than the last, planned. We have at least the next 100-300 years of major story canon planned.

The government and culture are both good and original.

En fin, make sure you go over the timeline and indepedent stories from major authors to get a grasp on not only our major story arc style, but the overall canon of the wiki and our individual styles.

Again, I'm not a tyrannical villain, I'm just doing my job. Get my green light and we're golden.