Thread:Krayfish/@comment-771241-20120503045137/@comment-1743498-20120503142759

Alright, here's my insight:

I do have to admit that it is kind of gory, much more than I expected. But it's still justifiable if that is Sol I Dor's nature and character. In combat, does Sol I Dor regularly rip off bits of his opponents?

The concept itself is good and the events that took place are fine, though it does need to be proofread and reworded. For example, some words are capitalized when they don't need to be.

But other than that, I say it's safe to give it the green light.