Thread:Krayfish/@comment-5418140-20120819105938/@comment-1743498-20120819143359

Regarding the Eldar Star Empire, I am aware of its similiarilties to Warhammer 40k. It is currently not involved with any major story arcs at this moment, and the author is currently away. (User:IceBite should know of his whereabouts.)

For your article, the picture seems to be in the right place. The planet article is well done, but I'm curious about a few things in the Sylthurians article. If the planet is called Sylthur, wouldn't it technically be true if all other sentient races were called Sylthurians, or is there a specific reason behind it?

The other thing is the life span. Long life spans may lead to a risk of overpopulation considering that the resources on Sylthur are scarce. Maybe a good way to fix this is that all Sylthur have the same hibernation times, undergoing it in times of food shortages.

Other than that, both articles look great.