Thread:Krayfish/@comment-5015926-20121019162006/@comment-1743498-20121019164734

The only problem I see right now at the moment is distances and locations. Rereading the locations the Matrion are, it seems they are at the edge of the Perseus Arm, and outside the galaxy. The Delsons are more than likely to be involved since the Matrion would have to pass through territory to reach Krar, which is just at the edge of the Galactic Core.

I need to know exactly how the Matrion travel between star systems. I know you want to portray them as mysterious and unknown, but the specifics need to be written down somewhere to avoid any potential inconsistencies.

Not having any presense near the Galactic Core is also a major setback. In order for Razon to find the files, let alone steal them, he would have to know where Krar was, where on the planet the files were stored, and be able to get past a maximum security facility. To be able to obtain all this info from such a remote area would be very impractical.