User blog comment:Krayfish/Light World - Sleepy Status Update 3/@comment-1743498-20160711190245/@comment-5870856-20160720225542

Okay, so in essence, you need a more cohesive story, some backstory/lore, more detailed character bios (especially for Amie) and a final draft for the game's synopsis. Sounds good, I'll see if I can help with any of those. In the meantime, I'd like if you could share the doc with me. I'll just PM my email address to you.