Board Thread:New on Galactic Crucibles/@comment-5135903-20141008164704/@comment-5135903-20141009081151

Avetzan1 wrote: I think the chapter 1 so far sounds like an overview-prologue, rather than a chapter. Just to mention. Yes, I thought that too, but it seems too small to be a prologue (though I guess length doesn't matter) and it kind of leads into the events of Chapter 1. I might change my mind later.

Avetzan1 wrote: Also, are the khoikapek still the same species or is name the only thing staying the same? They're roughly the same species, with similar appearance, evolution, languages, et cetera. The main difference will be in their biochemistry and possibly their psychology. I'm also considering removing their wings, replacing them with a frill around the head (the Khoikapek evolved as a fishing species, using their wings to shade the water and prevent glare; the addition of a frill would replace this function if the wings were removed), but I'm not sure yet. What do you think? (old Khoikapek image)