Talk:Kyekna United Monarchies/@comment-3582436-20130126001537

Well, I believe your descriptions of each section could be a bit more detailed. Plus, some of your sentences are missing punctuation, e.g. "the military for defense and assault but they usually only attack upon provocation."

The correct version should be "The military is for defense and assault, but they usually only attack upon provocation."

About the spelling, I'm not sure if there are any spelling mistakes, because I follow the Australian English system of spelling, not the American.