User blog:Krayfish/Going back and revising

One of the goals I have in mind is to make navigation and reading much easier - I'm specifically talking about the Kklxin story arc, arguably the best storyline on the wiki. I was rereading some of the earlier stories, and I realized that it may come across as confusing to new readers. This is likely due to some inconsistencies that have stacked up on each other and the fact that we didn't plan out the earlier stories before writing. Here's some of the issues that I wanted to address.

The main goal is to make the story easy to follow and understand for readers who haven't read any other articles.

Status of the Harbingers
Some parts say that they are gone for good while others say that there are still rogue Harbingers about. I personally think that by the time the Kklxin story arc occurs, the Harbingers are gone with zero remnants left of them. They are still mentioned as part of the backstory though.

Operation Dragonslayer
While we can keep all the action sequences, some parts of the plot should be redone in my opinion. The main issue is the Genodraco and Renr. We've suddenly thrown in a new set of bad guys at the reader early in the story only to never hear from them again. I think there's some parts that need revising.

Proposed changes

 * Make it a Kklxin invasion instead with Genodraco as the generals that need to be captured.


 * Renr became corrupted with greed and power after Infra bestowed him some abilities rather than being implanted by the Harbingers. He should reappear either in Operation Titanic Discoveries during the Karnas sequence or during The Final Confrontation just before the battle with Infra.
 * The Occulus is now a Kklxin ship.

Enter the GHD
Nothing seems wrong with this story for now, but we should definitely tie it more solidly to Operation Titanic Discoveries.

Operation Raising Hell
Nothing wrong here. We just need to make sure the Tholker clone appears again later.

Operation Titanic Discoveries
Once its all written down, we should split this article in two as it's getting very long.