Talk:Kyekna United Monarchies/Military/@comment-796766-20121103164623

This page is a mess. I understand it's incomplete, but several formatting and writing errors compound into each other to form a rather sloppy appearence. Not only this, but factual articles need to be written in an encyclopedic format; This site is to be thought of as a universal database for Omni 01. As such, personal observations and slang, such as 'gee, ya think?', should never be in a factual article. The only place such things should exist here is in dialogue, with come exceptions in narrative.