Board Thread:New on Galactic Crucibles/@comment-5135903-20141008164704/@comment-5135903-20141009080115

TheReturnOfTheKing wrote: Not bad so far, I like it. What have you got in mind for the Khoikapek? In what way? Do you mean in the context of the story or the wider wiki?

Avetzan1 wrote: I think the chapter 1 so far sounds like an overview-prologue, rather than a chapter. Just to mention.

Also, are the khoikapek still the same species or is name the only thing staying the same? I thought it was more like a prologue too, but it seemed too short to place separately; it also leads into the events of chapter 1, so I decided to place it in chapter 1. I might change my mind later.

The Khoikapek are roughly the same species as before, with similar appearance, colouration, evolution, languages, et cetera. The main difference is their biochemistry. The biggest change in terms of appearance that I'm planning is to remove their wings, replacing them with a large frill around the head (they evolved as fish hunters, using their wings to shade the water and prevent glare; the frill would replace this function if I were to remove the wings). What do you think?