Talk:Xanatron/@comment-796766-20121002205657/@comment-1743498-20121003175420

I'll give you my feedback:

"Note: X is a place-holder as the planet's name has not bin uploaded into the universal planet detabase. The planet's actual name is Exotrosis.]"

The wiki IS the universal databse, so the fact that it's listed here means that it's known.

"The planet orbits an unknown type of star that resembles a blackhole, but has no gravitational properties and those not affect the Earth-like gravity of the planet."

It's better to use an exisitng type of star rather then just saying it's unknown. A planet like this could survive around either a G or K class star.

"The planet is covered in a the large, planet-wide forest Venterra with a variety of wild life."

Aren't there any other biomes on this planet? Dead planets can get away with single biomes, but garden worlds are more likely to have varying terrain such as grasslands, mountaintops, beaches and more.

"They do not appear to require sun light, as they grow even in mountainous areas."

Sunlight is the most feasible way for a plant to grow. Without sunlight, you could get some small shrubs, but no trees. Also, as far as I know, carbon-based plants can't use xenon for life processes.

"The herbivores on the planet are equally as large, rangeing from the size of an average elephant to the size of Karnasuar town."

On a planet with the gravity of Earth, herbivores are unable to grow as large as a town. Their blood would not be able to flow fast enough to carry out life functions.