Forum:The Pyro Trinity- Cybeon, Axelia, and Scythoid

Hello, this is Pyrostar and I am attempting my first pitch. I had already made the page for one of my civilizations, so sorry about that. Anyway, I would like to pitch a trio of races I nicknamed "The Pyro Trinity". The trinity part is because all the civilizations' backstories are linked.

The Axelia
The Axelia were a small, avian race which originally lived on a large tropical planet nearby a Class G star on the outskirts of Omni 1. The Axelia had beaks, but had unfortunatly evolved away their wings, leaving only small tufts of feathers. Axelian fingers, descended from bird talons, were extremely adept at manipulating things, and they also had highly evolved brains, meaning they were perfectly suited for making technology. As such, the main Axelia export was either appliances or weapons- the latter of which they exceled (or Axeled :)) at.

The Axelia disbelived the theory of the Titans, as they disbelived the fact that any mere mortal creature could match up to a machine. To prove this, they attempted to use one of their own devices to slay a Titan. When the attempt inevitably failed (as Titans are god-like forces and cannot be killed by ANY means), the Axelia grew angry, and began onslaughting any race that the Titans protected, as they were the next best thing.

The Axelia put their skills to use during this war, and took advanced technology to the next level. They single-handedly created an entire race on their own- a race of synthetic creatures they dubbed the Cybeon. While the Cybeon were made to serve the Axelia, they were not merely mindless slaves and managed to create a civilization that nearly rivaled the Axelia's. The war continued, until the Titans decided that too much blood had been shed, and they wiped out all the Axelia in the galaxy. Why else would I be talking in past tense- the Axelia are an extinct species.

Well, that's Part 1 of thw Trinity. Tell me what you think, and Part 2 will come soon! Pyrostar (talk) 22:43, February 6, 2013 (UTC)