Thread:Krayfish/@comment-4872767-20120817021146/@comment-796766-20120817185053

Alright, I have to pull out the stops here (Nra 'Vadumee, Resident Expert on Science and Technology, major author, admin, co-founder, etc).

1) Welcome to Omniverse. Note that we have high sitting standards for writers and not everyone can meet those standards. We are a professionalist wiki, and you will hear me drill that numerous times. By that, I mean that we enforce professional standards. Do you have to write like Stephen King or Harper Lee? No. Do you have to behave like Stepthen King or Harper Lee? Yes. Constructive criticism, conventions of writing, critical analysis, peer reviews, and all manner and a plethora of other such matters are enforced here. You want to write here? Show us. Otherwise, we are also looking for other skill sets other than writing, such as artistry, programming, rendering, etc.

2) I assume that by 'width' you mean 'diametre'. A planet 60,000 miles in diametre is simple... mindbogglingly massive. It's almost impossible for that to be a natural terrestial world. For reference, Earth is 12,742 kilometres (7,970 miles, rounded down) in diametre on average. We are talking a planet almost 7 times the size of Earth. That's more than double the size of the Great Red Spot on Jupiter, the largest known storm in the universe. Tone it down some.

3) We are an original narrative writing wiki. Our purpose is the creation of high quality works of writing set within a universe of our original creation and the mentoring of new users interested in joining our community in the art of writing and its conventions. Taking Minecraft's creepers and giving them a sci-fi backstory is neither original nor good material for narrative writing. Please be creative. We'll help you brainstorm.

4) On the topic of originality, no copyrighted images or names. Kray went over this on your new page.

5) Even if you're adament on creepers, I'm not giving REST approval for them. That means that you cannot use this concept for the reason that it makes no scientific sense. In this case, the creepers make no biological sense. If you want to dispute this, we can talk science all you want. It's my job and my passion.

Finally, please forgive my bluntless and lack of tact. I'm not a tryannical villain, I swear. Call it tough love, but my real goal is to improve both your own writing skills, and the overall quality of Omniverse. A big part of professionalism is accepting and respecting your superiors and taking advice in the spirit it's given.

Happy editing!

Nra 'Vadumee