User blog:WikiBuilder1147/Review for AG stuff Part 1 - Civilisations and Governments

Now, let's get this straight: This is not a rant... I think. This is just a review.

Although Kray has already written a rant for other species and characters, I am writing a review that focuses on the Andromeda Galaxy.

NOTE: This is only my opinion. This has been written in good faith and I do not intend to insult authors. If you find anything offensive, I apologise in advance.

Estin
I find the Estin to be a bit vague. We hardly know anything about Estin history, nor do we know their appearance. I know that people aren't meant to know much about the Estin, but why? Why do we not have info about the Estin as vivid as everything else? I'd advise for adding more detail into the Estin articles.

Kyekna
I like the detail in the Kyekna articles. It describes each aspect of the Kyekna in detail, and the explanation of the castes of Kyekna society are interesting. However, the grammar and sentence structure seems a bit... off. Where are the capitals? In my opinion, this should be pretty basic. No offence, but the no-capitals thing comes from young children. I implore the author to correct the grammar. Try running each article through a spell checker.

Avetzan
Unlike the Estin, I like the comprehensiveness of the Avetza's history. However, I believe it would be more appropriate if the actual civilisation page was separate from the page about the main faction. Besides this, I do not have much to say about the Avetza.

more to come...