Talk:Origins/@comment-1743498-20121006133316

Very good read. The Tholker reference was actually quite funny.

I do have a minor nitpick though: For the bit with the asterisks, what I like to do instead, if I choose not to write out the word, is to imply that it was said. For example: "He screamed at the top of his lungs an expletive foul to the ears". It will help maintain the flow of the story.

As for the part with the violence, I think I'll make an official template out of it like we have for language warnings.

Other than that, great story. Looking forward to what happens afterwards.