Thread:SupcommMonroee/@comment-5418140-20120824122400

kk, so I am writing my first story, and although I have only written 100-150 words, I know what I am going to write (once I get a 1/2 way in, I'm practically home free. Would you mind checking over my story as i write it plz?

link here: http://omniversegc.wikia.com/wiki/The_Disappearance_of_the_Echleon

thx, Chin 