Thread:Krayfish/@comment-3582436-20121231123517/@comment-1743498-20121231151343

There are some continuity errors regarding Ahrganot's presence and the formation of GSSOC, but that can easily be fixed. But aside from that, Aaron should first spend time in some sort of other unit before joining GSSOC so that he can be evaluated more. If he joined some sort of special forces team unique to the FMASN, he can be studied more and perhaps even provide the code for the FMASN to create SANARI. Other than that, with some additional details, this can be a great story.

Also, I'll briefly cover some Dhragolon manners when you write dialogue with them in the future. When addressing a Dhragolon, it's best to refer to them by their full name, profession or second name as calling a Dhragolon by only their first name (i.e. Skizgo) is considered affectionate and should only be used by extremely close friends and relatives.