Talk:Kenaklesh/@comment-1743498-20130112153743

I noticed a few science errors here:

1. You might want to change the atmosphere composition. A planet with 99% oxygen would be completely lifeless as it would be covered in constant flames. I would recommend around 30% oxygen with the rest being nitrogen. 1% of it should be trace gases.

2. Secondly, what class star is Kakoonal? The blue stars (O, B and A) don't live long enough to form life bearing planets. Only F, G, K and M can form garden planets naturally. If you don't feel like changing the star's color, then the Kyekna could have been introduced to the planet after someone terraformed it, making Kenaklesh a young world (less than one billion years).

3. Judging by the picture, I'm assuming that Kalkak is supposed to be much smaller than its parent planet. Unfortunately, low-mass celestial bodies cannot sustain an Earth-like atmosphere. Your best bet is to increase its size so that it orbits binary to Kenaklesh. In the sky, it would still look like a moon.