Talk:Xanatron/@comment-796766-20121002205657

There is such little scientific sense here, my brain felt empty reading it. I just cannot even begin to list the parts that do make sense. The existence of a planet, maybe? I'm sorry, this whole thing is just...

Scrap it. Nothing here is worth keeping. Especially the 'oh no one knows what it's called' thing. That kills narrative. If some characters, or at least the audience, knows something that other characters don't, it's dramatic irony. That's good. But if no one, possibly not even the author, knows, then it's just really bad writing.