Thread:Krayfish/@comment-3582436-20121228092347

Hi, Kray

I've been thinking... I want to add a bit of storyline that involves the old Milurian, who will be known as Admiral Shlochren vo'Quotaris, befriending Aaron. The rest of the crew of the Victorious II also become fond of Aaron. When the Milurian Government finds out about Aaron several months later, they order the Admiral to hand him over for scientific study. The Admiral refuses, and Aaron gets captured by Milurian forces who raid the ship, and the Admiral is relieved of duty. Bound to the Admiral, rather than the Milurian establishment itself, his crew desert the Milurian Starfleet and rejoin the Admiral serving on a private starship, the S.S. Narios. Meanwhile, Aaron is taken to a Starbase orbiting a remote gas giant, several hundreds of light years away from Miypria, where he is deactivated.

Several years pass, and the Milurian engineers have created, based on Aaron's structure and design, new robots to serve in the domestic department (that's not important right now). Aaron is still deactivated, but the engineers keep the precious programming and resist the temptation to erase it. A few months later, the Admiral decides to invade the Starbase and rescue Aaron, endangering his own life. The rest of his crew follow him on the S.S. Narios, disguised as a cargo ship, whose real counterpart happens to make regular runs to the Starbase to carry equipment. They are allowed onto the Starbase, where the former Chief Engineer of the Victorious II puts Aaron back together and gets him online again.

Aaron and Co. then make their escape, and fly away on the Narios, just missing the hangar doors about to close on them. vo'Quotaris then says he and his crew are now fugitives, and an apparent 'threat' to the UDMP. Aaron then comes up with the idea of escaping to the MWG and starting a new life there, where no other Miluri would dare to go, because of the FMASN and all that. The Chief Engineer then states that the WarpDrive of their ship is not powerful enough for Intergalactic travel and it would take them centuries to get from one galaxy to the other. Aaron then suggests plugging his extremely powerful energy generators to the WarpDrive. The Admiral and his crew, refuse, but Aaron insists. So, the Chief Engineer shuts him down and plugs the WarpDrive to the power generators and the Narios vanishes into WarpSpace. Then, they hit it, and they start travelling at least 10 times their normal top speed.

It only takes them a few years to travel to the MWG. Then they come into contact... with... yep, the Dhragolon. The Dhragolon then take this case to the Galactic Senate. The Admiral, plus most of his crew, had served in the Milurian Marines before joining the Starfleet; Aaron had some abilities beyond most living species; and so the GSSOC pondered taking these potential members in. They decide to do that, beginning a new story arc...

So, what do you think? Am I being a bit too farfetched? 