Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-9071801-20130920172307

Well, I've at last got around to writing this. I hope there is enought detail, if not, please say and I'll try and add to it!

''The Mivár are an anceint reptilian-like race which live in the Riivek 12 system, which is located in the Andromeda Galaxy. Despite there age, because of Riivek 12's distance from any other star, they do not have interstellar space travel, ramaining relatively unknown. The Mivár are a land-dwelling race, being to heavy to swim and they never devolped any type of boat. They originate from the second furthest planet from there sun, Senth. Senth is a warm planet with a temperature of around 20 C in the winter and 32-40 C in the summer. Shortly after the Mivár invented spaceflight, they conquered the planet Krydo, which is now the most populated of the three planets. There are two quite distinct sub-races of the Mivár, the Sygols and the Midaé. ''

The Sygol:

''They are the most technically advanced of the two sub-races and the youngest. They stand at around 6-7 foot tall and they are the most water-hating of the two. Despite being the most advanced, the Sygols are incredibly jealous of the Midaé for the telepathic abilities and numerous wars have been fought between the two sub-races. 'They number around twelve billion, of which 78% live on Senth.''

The Midae:

''The oldest of the two sub-races, the Midaé are a proud people. They have immense telepathic power, one in every twenty-five having the ability to read others minds and on in thirty the ability to completely destroey lesser persons brain. They are nearly twice as numerous as the Sygol with near to twenty billion.''

History This is just a general outline. I've not completely formed the history yet.

   ''The Battle of Senth:   The battle which started the War of Two Armies. It was the first major confrontation between the Sygol and the Midaé.'' Launch of the first space ship: The launch of the 'Sky Explorer' could have given cthe Sygol an immense advantage over the Midaé, except for the fact that a Midaé spy copied the documents and specs for the ship and sent them on to the Midaén capital, Ríl. ''Encounter with the Alekodons: Pursued by a Midaén light cruiser, the scout ship 'Sky Searcher' made a forced landing on the planet Rguil, only to be attacked by strange creatures. '' ''The First Space War: After lengthy discussion and arguing the Sygolian government ask for aid from the Midaé. Soon after a combinded fleet of twenty-four Sygolian ships and nineteen Midaén ships take off and head for Rguil.'' MODERN AGE  